1) `my friend and i` → **`My friend and I`**
2) `traveling to a religious holiday` → **`traveling for a religious holiday`** (یا **`going to a religious holiday`**)
3) `yesterday,` (جاش خوبه، فقط تاکید: باید اول جمله با ویرگول بیاید) → **`Yesterday, ...`**
4) `for me and hersel` → **`for both of us`** (یا **`for my friend and me`**)
5) `hersel` → **`herself`** *(ولی در این جمله بهتره کلاً `both of us` یا `my friend and me` استفاده کنی)*
6) `Today` بهتره اول جمله باشد → **`Today, ...`**
7) `on her mobile` → **`on her mobile phone`**
8) `i love...` → **`I love...`**
9) `becaus` → **`because`**
10) `Voluntary` → **`voluntary`**
11) `and she does Voluntary work` → **`and does voluntary work`**
12) `tv` → **`TV`**
13) `attended a tv program` → **`appeared on a TV program`** (یا **`took part in a TV program`**)
14) `ok, well` → **`Okay, well,`**
15) `What do you do on your travels?` (از نظر گرامر درست است، ولی طبیعیتر:) → **`What do you usually do when you travel?`**
بعد متن درساش میشه :
My friend and I are traveling to a religious holiday. Yesterday, my helpful friend booked a hotel for both of us. Today, she has a headache because she hit her head on the door. Now, we are watching a quiz show on her mobile phone. I love my friend because she is so generous and kind. She bakes lovely cakes and does voluntary work. She also attended a TV program. Okay, well, what are your friends like? What do you do on your travels?
تاج فراموش نشه😁👋🏻
